Creating Animal Characters

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I’ve always loved animals and animal stories. Growing up, some of my favorite books were E.B. White’s Charlotte’s Web, Walter Farley’s Black Stallion series, and Marguerite Henry’s Misty of Chincoteague. As an adult, I worked in a zoo aviary, and as a volunteer at wildlife rescue organizations in California and Alaska, working mainly with birds, including raptors.

I wondered, “What if I was that animal? What would I think? How would I perceive the world? How would I behave? What would I say to people?”

So it was only natural that, when I began writing, animals figured prominently in many of my stories. My animal characters acted in realistic ways when I began, but, over time, many of them began to narrate their own stories or speak to each other and humans.

What’s so special about animal characters? Why should you write from an animal’s perspective? First of all, animals have access to events, conversations, and secrets that humans do not. They are the literal fly on the wall or the dog sitting under a chair in an outdoor café. Animals also have a unique perspective on the world due to their size, intellect, and life span. How would a fruit fly see things differently than an elephant? This unique perspective can take your story to a whole new level of awareness.

Secondly, it’s fun!


When writing from an animal’s perspective, there are four elements you will want to consider:

Point of View

Intelligence – both intellectual and emotional


The Wilding

How you, the writer, develop these elements will determine how realistic or fantastical your animals are while keeping your animals believable. Let’s take a look at each of these elements.

Point of View

Point of view (POV) is the narrator’s perspective within the story; the POV character is the one around whom the story revolves, and from whose head the story is presented.

First person POV is the most intimate because the reader is in the mind of the character and privy to all of the character’s thoughts and emotions. However, this POV demands that the non-human narrator communicate directly to the reader in a language that the reader understands. If that makes your animal character seem more fantastical than you want, explore third person POV.

Third person POV is the least intimate, but allows the writer the greatest freedom to express the animal’s perceptions. Third person is the easiest way to present a non-human perspective, because it can describe the animal’s thoughts without breaking that 4th wall where the animal speaks directly to the reader in a human language, so to speak, and keep the “realistic” aspect without sacrificing what the animal knows and feels.

Ultimately, you will choose the POV that will best serve the story, just as if you were using a human character as your narrator.

Intelligence – Intellectual and Emotional

Now it’s time for a little research. If you’ve decided to write about a certain animal, I’m going to assume that you know at least a little about that animal. But don’t rely on “What I know” – it’s a trap! Don’t believe everything you see on the Animal Planet channel, either. Some of their shows are fictional but presented as if fact. Instead, read a wide selection of credible sources. Research the latest discoveries and philosophies on animal intelligence. Seek out experts and ask them questions. You may be surprised at what science can now tell us about an animal’s thoughts and emotions.

For example, seizure alert dogs can detect a human seizure before it occurs. It’s pretty remarkable that dogs can sense something medical that will occur, and even more remarkable that THEY ACT UPON THAT KNOWLEDGE on their own. That sounds like intelligence and empathy to me.

Do your research, then let your imagination take over. Challenge what we humans assume is the emotional or intellectual range of an animal. How many emotions does your animal character feel? Don’t limit yourself to primary emotions like joy, fear, surprise, anger, disgust, or sadness. Let your non-human characters feel empathy, cooperation, and other emotions that go beyond the basic.


At this point, you may think that making up a creature, or using a mythical one, would be a lot less work and research. Not true. Animals—even mythical ones—have bits and pieces of real-life animals and behave differently from human characters. By incorporating realistic behavior from the real-life animal that your creature most resembles, you will build a believable character. Does your dragon hunt more like a bird or a snake? Does your griffin react more like an eagle or a lion? What would these behaviors look like? Do your research and incorporate realistic behavior into your characters and they will come alive.

But what if realistic behavior doesn’t serve your story? If you’re going to deviate from the “accepted convention” of that animal’s behavior, I’d advise you to explain this difference to your reader. For example: If you are going to have a pig who starts to herd sheep, then the reader needs to know WHY the pig is motivated to herd sheep. Perhaps he was taken in by a female border collie when he was a baby. Or, if your mythical creature does not follow what is generally accepted behavior, then do explain it. It doesn’t mean that you can’t write the animal in that way, and subverting the readers’ expectations is a wonderful thing, but don’t confuse or irritate your audience by not explaining why they are deviations.

Let’s look at the problem of realistic wolf behavior and werewolves. The idea of an almighty alpha male wolf who rules the pack with violence is a myth. As Barry Lopez, American author and essayist, states in Of Wolves and Men, “Alpha animals do not always lead the hunt, break trail in snow, or eat before others do. An alpha animal may be alpha only at certain times for a specific reason, and, it should be noted, is alpha at the deference of the other wolves in the pack.” This, however, could make for a boring story if all the werewolves worked cooperatively But you could add an element of cooperation into your werewolf pack and use it as a jumping-off point to develop new werewolf pack dynamics.

The Wilding

The fourth element to consider is what I call The Wilding, a term I adopted from Garth Stein’s The Art of Racing in the Rain. The Wilding is the moment when the main character, whether human or non-human, slips most fully into its primal animal self. It’s the integration of the everyday self (that we show in public) and that dark aspect of our psyche that we’d probably like to keep hidden away. In fiction, The Wilding represents that moment when the animal’s primal spirit takes over; it is a shift in the animal’s behavior and/or perception. The animal perception takes over completely, dominating the animal (or, in some stories, the human POV character) and overpowering all human characteristics.

Carl Gustav Jung, Swiss founder of analytical psychology, believed that every human had a ‘shadow’ or dark aspect to his or her personality. To Jung, the shadow was negative, filled with primitive and inferior attributes. The Wilding can either bring the character closer to a positive integration with its natural self, or it can be a moment to be avoided at all costs.

Don’t all characters face their inner demons, shadow selves, at some point in our stories? After all, that’s what the story is all about, right? Why not use an animal character to highlight this human experience? A writer can explore this dark psychological aspect of the human mind through her animal characters by incorporating The Wilding.

There’s a lot of this sort of thing in shape-shifter characters – when the animal side overtakes the human side and it’s usually a big focal point in the story. I think that’s why shapeshifter/werewolf stories are so popular. It’s sort of like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Also, there is usually a simplicity to this state of being an animal that is compelling. BUT there’s a price to pay, as well, to being animalistic and not living within the bounds of human society and, for werewolves, it is killing humans.

So, how do you portray this moment? That depends on your animal—and you! What are your animal’s basic needs? What would it fight for? Kill for? Never do? HOW would it fight? Kill? Protect? If you ask these types of questions, you will soon discover what The Wilding would look like for your animal.


Writing from an animal’s perspective can jump start your creative mind and bring a depth to your writing you couldn’t get with human characters. By exploring these four elements—POV, intelligence, behavior, and The Wilding—you will add credibility to your animal characters. The challenge is to dig deeper, ask the hard questions, and take time to research. Why not depict animal characters with the same full emotional range that we bestow upon our human characters? Why not use animal characters to embody all that humans are capable of, all that humans dream of being? Why not use animal characters in all genres of writing?

My challenge to you is: Shake things up and look at the world from an animal’s perspective.


Some resources that might interest you as you write from an animal’s perspective:

Balcombe, Jonathan. Second Nature: The Inner Lives of Animals.

Bekoff, Marc. Animal Passions and Beastly Virtues:   Reflections On Redecorating Nature AND The Emotional Lives of Animals

Bekoff, Marc and Jessica Pierce. Wild Justice: The Moral Lives of Animals

Davis, Lauren. “Why Everything You Know About Wolf Packs Is Wrong”

De Lint, Charles. The Cats of Tanglewood Forest

Duncan, Glen. The Last Werewolf

Gradin, Temple, and Catherine Johnson. Animals in Translation

London, Jack. “Call of the Wild”

Lopez, Barry. Of Wolves and Men

Lord, Nancy. “Recall of the Wild” is a great short story in collection, The Man Who Swam with Beavers.

Morell, Virginia. Animal Wise: The Thoughts and Emotions of Our Fellow Creatures

Pierce, Tamora. Wild Magic: The Immortals Book I. AND Wolf-speak: The Immortals Book II.

Stein, Garth. The Art of Racing in the Rain

Valente, Catherynne M. “White Lines On a Green Field” is great short story in The Best Science Fiction and Fantasy of the Year 2012

White, E.B. Charlotte’s Web

Yu, E. Lily. “The Cartographer Wasps and the Anarchist Bees” is another great short story in The Best Science Fiction and Fantasy of the Year 2012


8 thoughts on “Creating Animal Characters

  1. This is the best information I have gotten for myself concerning writing about animal characters. I write a series right now called
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  2. I really appreciated your insight to Writing From An Animal’s Perspective. I am a part of a third grade team and we are trying to build a unit that will have students write a story from the perspective of an animal, who people typically find nuisances. Do you have any recommendations for mentor texts that we could share with our students to kick off our unit? Thank you!

    • I’m glad you found the post helpful, Tiffany. Unfortunately, I haven’t found anything like a mentor text that I could recommend. It might be helpful to have the class read something that is told from an animal perspective, something short, that illustrates these techniques. I think “The Cats of Tanglewood” is for 4-6 grade (some sources say 8-12 years old), so it may not be appropriate for third grade. “The World According to Humphrey” is the correct level, I think.
      I’ve used a writing exercise your students might enjoy: I have flash cards with an animal on each one, along with fun facts. I pass the cards out at random (although participants can certainly pick the animal they want) then participants enjoy 5 minute free writes using each of the techniques I’ve mentioned. For example, one free write might be in 1st person, or what the animal is thinking (intelligence), or the animal reacting to something (behavior).
      Please let me know if you find something or if I can help in some other way!

  3. A few weeks ago, I finished a short story which included a parrot in an important secondary role. My critique group loved the bird and felt she had so much more potential than what I had written. So, as I approached revisions, I pulled out my prep notes and was embarrassed at how little character development I had completed on the parrot. I quickly did a search about developing animal characters and found your helpful and insightful article. So a very big thank you for investing your time to share your knowledge for this post! I’ll use every bit of it. 🙂

    P.S. And, while foxes are generally considered nuisances only to farmers, I think Sara Pennypacker’s PAX could be an excellent mentor text for a classroom. Just a possibility.

    • I’m so glad my post was helpful, Bridgette! I’m pleased you’re pursuing your story from the parrot’s POV. Be sure to let me know when you get it published. 🙂
      I have “Pax” on my shelf right now, slowly making its way up the stack to be read. I’ll move it right up to the top! Thanks.

  4. Hi Elizabeth
    Indeed a pleasure reading your work.
    I am writing non- fiction picture books for children 4-7
    I am using animal characters to teach children how to eat healthy
    Would I be over anthropormophising if:
    I illustrate cheetahs drinking orange juice for strong bones and teeth
    Appreciate a response

    • I’m glad my page on writing animals was helpful, Jean!
      Since you’re writing non-fiction, is it ok to have a cheetah drinking something it wouldn’t normally drink? If you were writing a child’s fictional book teaching healthy eating, I’d agree that a cheetah drinking orange juice would be fun. But if it’s non-fiction, perhaps a different animal that eats oranges in real life would be a better choice?
      As for anthropomorphizing, I have no problem with that as long as it’s what’s best for you story!
      Best wishes for your writing!

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